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charlene prince birkeland's avatar

Hi! Good to see your face and name pop up here! I would love to read your story. It's not a genre a typically read, does that matter to you? Take good care✨

JL Tooker's avatar

Charlene, here's the link to Starwoven: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aAxK3_4tmvhJhydRj0BBQIHa3ORaZpKn/view?usp=drive_link

I think it's almost better if it isn't your typical genre, but please don't force yourself to read it. I'm looking not for a critique, but a feeling, e.g.:

- where you got pulled in

- where you drifted

- what you thought the story was about

Any hints will be helpful.

Thank you.

Jennifer

Joshua Robinson's avatar

Is this *Starwoven: Hear my Call* or another story? I have the pdf of *Starwoven* and started reading but I don't think I finished it. I'd love to help with some feedback, so I'll pick it up again and get back to you soon. 💖

Hope you're doing well!

JL Tooker's avatar

Josh, yes it is *Starwoven*. I'm really looking for (1) where you got pulled in, (2) where you drifted, and (3) what you thought the story was about.

No hurries; no worries. Thank you.

P.S. I'm not feeling like myself yet, but I expected it to take time. So, time we shall take. Love to you and the Peggy clan.

Hieronymus Hawkes's avatar

I would love to read your story. Don't know how I missed it.

JL Tooker's avatar

Heironymus, I have missed you ... where have you been? Never mind, I'm the one who has been MIA.

Thank you so much for reading this for me, I have no sense how it lands among others. Let me know if you have any trouble with the link.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aAxK3_4tmvhJhydRj0BBQIHa3ORaZpKn/view?usp=sharing

I look forward to hearing your thought!

Jennifer