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Joshua Robinson's avatar

I'm curious: how far into the book were you when you came across the sentence that stopped you? It's probably easier to take a pause and allow yourself to be vulnerable if the author has taken their time to establish trust. I read a book once that made a bold pronouncement on the very first page, which raised my suspicion for the entire story (honestly I should have stopped there--I only read it as a favor to a friend and it was... pretty awful). The point is that it was hard to give the writer my trust so early on, and in a time when it seems a lot of writing tends toward short (social media posts, etc) that really limits the amount of time to build it.

charlene prince birkeland's avatar

Your words today remind of when reading Stephen King's *On Writing* when it first came out. He warned about taking writing classes and the phrase that stuck with me was the students in the class tend to use fancy words to create an "artificial sense of profundity."

As an English major I'd tried to read many books like that, Michael Chabon comes to mind first, and I could sniff the chest puffing words and really struggled to get past it. Contrast that with books by the Bronte sisters or say Flaubert, and I was mesmerized but the simplicity. I don't just find room for those stories, I'll stop everything for them because I've connected with the natural storytelling. It's not "try hard."

That doesn't mean it's cozy or light -- on the contrary! It means I feel alive while I read versus needing to pause every five words to grab a dictionary or look for hidden meanings.

And if we're being honest here, it's the kind of writer I always strive to be.

Thanks for this post. You've really peeled back the layers on narrative trust and it's making me look deeper even more.

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