EPISODE 2: Speak to Me
Great tension. Every word is spot on.
wow ... thank you again for the feedback. I definitely know how to cause tension ---just wasn't sure I could show it with my writing. LOL
Loving the tension here. We're definitely building to something, and I'm excited to learn what!
Joshua, thanks for reading. I'm biased, but I think you may be right ... about tension building. So happy to share it!! :-)
Great tension. Every word is spot on.
wow ... thank you again for the feedback. I definitely know how to cause tension ---just wasn't sure I could show it with my writing. LOL
Loving the tension here. We're definitely building to something, and I'm excited to learn what!
Joshua, thanks for reading. I'm biased, but I think you may be right ... about tension building. So happy to share it!! :-)